I want to feel your warm heart,
beating vibrantly within
your soft breast pushed against my chest,
my hands entangled with your skin
I want to feel your lust
and taste your sin.
Tuesday, June 23, 2009
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taste my sin???
i don't think so xD
I think:
I want to feel your lust
and taste your sin.
Would sound better as
I want to feel your lust
I want to taste your sin
because of the rhythm. Just a thought...
hmmm
it kinda depends how you read it >>
it doesnt sound right at all when i read it like that xD
when i get the thing out of my mouth im actually gonna start making recordings cos no one ever really reads my poems the way i write them to be read
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